My Deep Desires

Deep Desires
To have 
the life I dream of,
I ask to my Lord above.
To have
 everything, anything,
To have 
someone,anyone.
To have 
love, someone to think of.
To have 
happiness, and fill emptiness.
To have
 successes and many blesses.
To have
 deep desires are fires
They won't burn out,
until you start to doubt.
This is what life is all about.
These are my fires,
my deep desires.

                                                    Sincerely,
                                                   Aishah


#OctPoWriMo Day 12
Prompt: Write about desire in whatever form you chose.
Words: Desire, Lust, Wanting, Obsession, 
Fascination, Possess, Love, Enraptured

20 comments

  1. Excellent write! What you want, what you desire...I really hope it all comes to you. Thank you for sharing!

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    1. Thank you very much Rod! I really appreciate it! With time, it will- I believe so :)

      Sincerely,
      Aishah

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  2. Interesting contrast between the big dreams and the humbleness of asking the Lord above.

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    1. Thank you! I believe HE gives us what we deserve.

      Sincerely,
      Aishah

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  3. I hope you are able to achieve what you desire. Above all, always value your own worth!
    http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/10/napowrimo-2014-day-12.html

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    1. Thanks Adam!! That is true, thank you for that!

      Sincerely,
      Aishah

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  4. It's a nice idea, but God rarely acts as a vending machine. I hope you find the person you're looking for. This is well written and makes its point strongly.

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    1. Thank you Lizzi. I believe God has a plan for us and HE knows best for us, and gives us what we deserve when the time is right.

      I hope so too, haha but the poem isn't just about finding a person, but that's part of it- not the entirety though. Its also about finding my own success and happiness.

      Thank you once again!

      Sincerely,
      Aishah

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  5. I love the rhthym and thought in this!

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    1. thank you Fifi! I liked the outcome of this poem :)

      Sincerely,
      Aishah

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  6. May all your dreams come true Aishah. Beautiful poem. :)

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    1. Thank you Payal, I really appreciate it :)

      Sincerely,
      Aishah

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  7. I like this. I can see your passion and your fire. Hope you have a stellar week! :-)

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    1. Thank you Cindy! Hope you have a wonderful too!
      Sincerely,
      Aishah

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  8. A fine poem, very well written. Best wishes Aishah ...

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  9. May you find the path that leads to your dreams.

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    1. Aww, thanks Beth! Thank you, I appreciate it:)

      Sincerely,
      Aishah

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  10. Im with Beth... I hope these dreams and prayers come true!

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    1. Thank you Zoe! That really means a lot to me :)

      Sincerely,
      Aishah

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